yexianhui 发表于 2024-1-17 14:34   全显示 1楼
恭喜三天大大开新书，从男主的视角切入林心颖，我感觉她高高在上，而且这本番外篇吧！最后结尾写林家和高家的故事，为后面埋下伏笔 。第一章没什么色情的肉戏，希望后面几章加快剧情。第一章写林颖儿的剧情偏多，不会是单女主吧！多写点心情剧情的描写会更好。
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