yiwenji 发表于 2022-1-13 15:32   全显示 1楼
叙事明了，文笔还是不错的。女性角色铺的很大，可以借鉴当下都市后宫小说给女性的性格进行划分避免脸谱雷同，比如冰山美女总裁，严肃认真的熟女上司，暴力冲动的警花，温和知心姐姐，媚惑妖娆的少妇，腹黑御姐等等。。这些貌似都市比较常出现的女性类型，如果作者自己有设定好人设的话当我没说过  。。。。另外希望不要绿吧，武侠绿文已经多如牛毛了
本帖最近评分记录
  • 夜月 金币 +8 认真回复，奖励！ 2022-1-13 17:23
0
回复帖子 发新话题
联系我们 ｜ 电脑版
SiS001.com © 2004-2020

Fatal error: Uncaught RedisException: OOM command not allowed when used memory > 'maxmemory'. in /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/include/dRedis.class.php:57 Stack trace: #0 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/include/dRedis.class.php(57): Redis->rPush() #1 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/include/statistics.inc.php(378): dRedis::rpush() #2 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/include/statistics.inc.php(289): matomoStatistics() #3 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/include/global.func.php(490): dstatistics() #4 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/forumdata/templates/23_footer.tpl.php(84): output() #5 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/forumdata/templates/23_viewthread.tpl.php(365): include('/home/wwwroot/s...') #6 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/forumdata/templates/23_viewthread_article.tpl.php(1): include('/home/wwwroot/s...') #7 /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/viewthread.php(438): include('/home/wwwroot/s...') #8 {main} thrown in /home/wwwroot/sis/public_html/forum/include/dRedis.class.php on line 57